Edited by Durrendal.
This chapter is longer than the previous one, but I will keep it at the same number of parts in total.
For this part I changed the paragraphing, seeing how the descriptions are rather dense. I also adjusted the tenses and tried to make it generally flow smoother. Hope it has improved at least a bit. 🙂
Sorry, I had intended to get this one done yesterday, on its new time slot, but ran out of time since I had other stuff to do first.
From now on this series will be released Wednesday, every two weeks, in alternation with Hakai no Miko. Also, I think I didn’t mention it before, but chapter 3 has 5 parts in total.
Sorry for the slightly longer delay. My RL situation is shifting at the moment, so you will need to be satisfied with one part every two or three weeks for a little while longer. Once everything’s set on my side, and depending on the support for this series, I will upgrade it to a fixed part release every two weeks or even faster.
The first part has been edited by Durrendal, and the second part is a self-edit! I also added a Table of Contents page now. 🙂
Self-edited. Too tired to set up a ToC etc. today. Will do so later. As for release rates: The more people read and comment, the more likely it will get a high release rate.
Depending on the readerbase, I will finish this story and also translate the spin-off which already has 5 volumes.